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Welcome back to Fight for Justice, Revision . Your profile has been approved. Don't forget to make a Locker Room if you haven't already done so and make sure that all of your information in the Who Plays Who is correct.

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[attr="class","likedoinfo"]Welcome back to Fight for Justice, Revision.

While we encourage our players to chase their narratives and write cool things, we do have to keep things in check for the sake of balance. In particular, moving over from the previous site to this one, we agreed to lower the power level of the site back down as it was haphazardly creeping out of control due to our original team's shortsightedness when we inherited the system immediately during a time of great revision. With that sort of context given, I'd like to talk about your Quirk.

Not all Quirks can be considered fair or equal—especially those from the source material. One such example would be Eri's Quirk: Rewind. Her Quirk is one of the most powerful Quirks we've seen in the source material with it going on record as being capable of rewinding someone out of existence. A quirk like that is not something that I would allow on FFJ because it is far too unfair a quirk when dropped into a setting where it can be used against other people. That's keeping in mind one of the limiting factors of Eri's Quirk: it accumulates over a certain amount of time and cannot be used if she lacks the resource to do so. Your Quirk can rewind and accelerate something through space AND time, and it is completely resourceless to do so.

Given the complexity of your Quirk, it's a bit hard to navigate what I'd want about the quirk to change in a slow back-and-forth dialogue where I post a review, you edit then resubmit, then I post another review. It'd probably be more conducive if we discussed it actively in detail on Discord, so please reach out to me in my dms: Koffee-Kun#9765

Regardless, I can likely say that your Quirk most certainly will not make it to the new site without significant nerfs, here are the few that I will be adamant on: she cannot use her quirk to move things forward AND backward (one or the other, and I'm heavily leaning no forward movement through time and space at all), she cannot move things to and from her, she cannot cause permanent changes as a result of rewinding time, and require her quirk to establish physical contact to od its magic.

Additionally, your math on the Thread Inbox is off. You forgot to account for a B Rank in your mathematical breakdown, so you're over your budget.

I have changed your Thread Inbox request from an [R] to an [NR]. Change it back to an [R] after you make the edits for a re-review.